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I cannot speak for the other deviators, so I have to say this piece seems to be extremely good. As I look into the picture I am asked for more, however, the nature of the shot itself takes it away. I am prompted to fall into the mystique of the photo of itself.

But enough praise, let's get to what you asked for. The vision as I mentioned earlier is heavily dreamy and I can see it. Maybe it wasnt the intention at first, but that is what instantly pops in my mind. Futhermore, the vision of the piece could be emphasized by digital editing; not a lot just a little. Maybe you could also try shooting this at night?

On terms of individuality I think that this piece shows how perspective can be used to illustrate meaning, but it lacks some of the definition that it takes to really display that. You might want to consider using a filter for this......

Oh and impact? Just read the first paragraph over again. I think I'm still trapped in your photo......